Business Letters / December 1, 2018 / Nanette Watson
When in doubt don t risk embarrassment; phone the organization concerned and ask. Some people borrow an awful technique from email and use a person s whole name in the salutation e.g. "Dear Suzan St Maur." I don t know about you but this irritates the h*ll out of me and I would not recommend it. So when your letter is addressed to "Mr J C Jennings" your salutation is "Dear Mr Jennings." If the information you have is simply "Joanna C Jennings" you can probably take a chance and write a salutation of "Dear Ms Jennings." I don t know many male Joannas but don t count on it... Writing business letters is a skill that a person should have since it involves creating formal correspondences concerning your company product or service.
They have a deep mistrust of email and for good reason as its confidentiality can never be guaranteed. Business letters are at least fairly private - you have to assume it s easier and faster to snoop on email than it is to steam envelopes open over boiling water. In other instances too printed letters provide a more tamper-proof formal record of business arrangements complaints employee warnings/terminations and other issues that need to be carved into tablets of stone. (Well paper anyway.) Old fashioned structure modern style Highlighted and ridiculed by the casual nature of email the quaint formality of the old fashioned business letter seems positively Dickensian and totally inappropriate for the way we do business now.
Readers do not like repetitive messages so do your best to avoid that. Scan every sentence and make sure they are essential to your message. Anything less than that should be deleted from your letter. Be Courteous and Polite This should be mandatory in writing these letters especially if you are talking to someone in a higher position. Depending on the nature of your message every appropriate courtesy should be extended to your reader. Make sure you address him properly as befitting his position. If you are writing a letter addressed to someone in a lower position do not appear condescending. Be Positive This is important especially for sales oriented letters. Use a positive tone of writing when creating your sentences. Substitute negative terms with positive ones. Using the proper words will help keep your reader interested in reading your message. Forget Creativity A business letter is not the medium for you to express your creativity. Do not use fancy words or use flowing narratives that you normally use in creative writing.